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This is my second comic-style character and I have to say it is a definite improvement from my first. Started this when I should have been studying for my APs but this was much more fun. I really like how it turned out but if there is anything that you think could use improvement on please leave a comment or critique. It would be much appreciated!!! 
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The proportions of her face are off a bit. You could say her eyes are too high or her forehead is too small, likewise her mouth is too low or her chin is too small. I took the liberty of doing a quick cut and paste to make these minor adjustments [link] Also her hips are smaller than they should be and are somewhat underdefined (I see that a lot here, female characters with male shoulder/hip proportions. Male shoulders are wider than their hips, females its the other way around.)
That said, you should be pleased with how it turned out. Your character looks good! Are you going to ink her and post her someplace where we colorists can do our thing?
That said, you should be pleased with how it turned out. Your character looks good! Are you going to ink her and post her someplace where we colorists can do our thing?